First pass.
in fact add that it HAS to start with 'D'
remove the part about not having to start with 'D' and ill pass it
Rejected. Don't you dare ever bump a post again.
Seconded.
This doesn't need an application so long as it follows the engineered lifeforms lore. Moving to denied.
Alright. I'll be giving this a failure then, as energy blades aren't really a thing in GC's setting. I'd recommend looking at plasma blades, since...
Is it an energy blade? A plasma blade? A blow torch and not actually a blade?
Hey there. I'll be grading this today. Firstly, what exactly is the blade meant to be?
// A new post would make it's way onto the nexus, spread across various sites and forums discussing the Undercrypt as well as others typically...
Thank you. I'm giving this it's initial pass.
Alright. After having read this over, I only have one concern. If the application is meant to be obtainable by all willing to go through the...
After some consideration, I am giving this a rejection. While I was willing to work with you to make this passable, implying that you had edited...
I'd like you to edit in the information you sent me, since there's no reason for it to be kept hidden. After having thought on this more, I do...
Name: Invisibility Cloaks Description: In their inactive state, invisibility cloaks are dull grey in color with a small hexagonal pattern...
Moving to denied as I'm not happy with the current state of the application and rewrote it.
Alright. After reading the app over one final time, I only have two concerns. First, you mention that the nanodrones give off light. Does that...
Alright. I'd like for you to remove this, so that the user immediately uncloaks if they are hit by an EMP since the nanocells are all destroyed.
Thank you. Can I ask what you mean by "Device affected by EMP will 'freeze' the nanocells in place for several minutes."
Thank you for fixing it 17. Moving on, things for the most part look better than last time but I do still have a few issues. I'd like for you to...
