Pending. Significant re-writes discussed in dms.
First pass!
Pending. There was discussion of this in dms, but I'm putting the notes here for documentation purposes that way if another grader looks at it...
Pass. Due to an error in the reforging, Crown has gained a fear of being alone.
Pass. Maur has gained a slight hand tremor. It is linked to a psychological cause, and can be overcome in kind.
Wow! I wonder what the 'Great Work' is? I'm sure this won't have consequences on the greater Fringe!
//Accessible through several news re-posting services is a local news story from the People's Republic of Knife's Edge - the break-away state that...
[ATTACH] [Province] : Olympus [Announcement] : The Aspects of the Atlas Economy Exciting change sweeps the Empire as the Emperor announces the...
After some discussion and minor edits, first pass!
this is real as fuck and also true
Despite being the first pass, I second the fail. I was heavily involved in those discussions, and the first pass was a major oversight on my part....
[ATTACH] [Province] : Olympus [Announcement] : IMD’s ‘STIM PAC’ Program Reaps Rewards Months after the project started, [IMD] reports back on...
Pass. They made boomcats to go with boomrats fr
First Pass
First Pass after minor edits and some discussion. Black Blight for Robots!
[IMG] [Province] : Olympus [Announcement] : Director Paya Itzicuitla Reshapes Housing New policies put forward by the [Department of Civil...
Second pass after discussion and edits
Pending. I like it. Fucked up alternative cloning method / medical procedure to dramatically change a character. Only a few things of note: 1)...
