Looks good to me. This is something that barely needs to be apped in my opinion, but I'm not deferring it because it's nice to have documentation...
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-have rough character idea (species, name, appearance and base premise. “What if I made a non-evil shifter”,”I need a visitant character that...
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February 27, 3289 I think we have gold. A half of a solid statue. It and pixels were costly to carry back home. I do not know where it came from,...
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why was this failed
Between my previous grading and now, I received a complaint from another player about the grading of this app, and then proceeded to have a ~2...
hi bro. ive been doing good GC has sort of been doing the same as always. we have some new people and hubs, etc
It's about damn time we got a species adapted to zero G!! Some things I'd like to see detailed in their second stage: - Why did they develop...
Pending Basis for the app is good, only a few adjustments need to be made. This section needs some elaboration. What is this metabolism? What...
Sorry for the giant delay. Second pass! Zircon's concerns pretty much mirror mine: - The "non-noble gas is converted into oxygen" thing is crazy,...
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Pending Reproduction and size need more detail. Fungus reproduction and size varies a lot. Lifespan also needs more detail
A scifi staple. I'm surprised something like this doesn't exist already. 1st pass
Seconded
Fail I hate to do this to anything that falls under the description of "evil metal that kills you." I love Evil metal That Kills You. This...
Seconded Well-written app but massively overpowered. I wouldn't entrust this to a GM, let alone given out as a reward to players. If you want to...
W + no ratio + vouch + oxygen in welding tank + reactor overloading + sub doors rewired + oliver is hungry
*shakes doxs hand smiling calmly*