Clearmind Vapor

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  1. Ninin

    Ninin New Arrival

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    Name: Clearmind Vapor, Clearmind Mist
    Description: Clearmind Vapor is usually contained in a glass flask with a vacuum sealed top, though size and shape of the flask varies. The vapors themselves tend to be a pale blue with small, glowing points in it, but appearance can change with the brewer. They smell strongly of incense, most sweet.
    Abilities: Enables the user to clear their mind, or others, of influences. This includes medium amounts of drunkenness and other influencial substances. This effect lasts for two hours.
    Though to a weaker extent, the vapors can be spread out through a group of people for the same purpose as above, though to a weaker extent.
    Can help in stressful situations to focus the user and relive stress.
    Conditional Abilities (Optional): Guess it can sorta be used as a emergency light.
    Can treat ADHD in large amounts.
    Limitations: Users tend to focus on one objective, which can be good alone, but usually isn't in groups.
    Users can become dependent on the subastance for daily use, should it be used commonly.
    After the duration of the vapor is up, the user will become more vulnerable to influence, though not much more than normal. This effect lasts for a hour.
    Using the vapor to clear drunkenness will eventually lead the user into a huge fucking hangover.
    Conditional Limitations (Optional): Cold environments will freeze the vapor and render it useless until warmed.
    Pregnant people shouldn't use it.
    How does it work: Using strong insences, a small touch of adrenaline inducing pheromones, and a dash of vapored adderal, the mist forms a potent wakeupslap for the brain and the body. 
    Flavor text: Created by Morgan Snip for use against figures like Mother in the UC, and for use against stressful situations.
    Attainability: Open.
    Tags: Civilian.
    Category: Medical.
     
  2. Nemo

    Nemo Leader of the Rat Crew Staff Member Community Monitor Diamond Donator

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    Hey @"Ninin", let's begin.​


    I only have issues with the part about "curing brainwashing". During traditional brainwashing, the targeted memories are quite literally removed. Smelling something wouldn't bring it back. Unless I'm missing something, I'd like you to remove that part of the abilities.​
     
  3. Ninin

    Ninin New Arrival

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    Can do,
     
  4. Nemo

    Nemo Leader of the Rat Crew Staff Member Community Monitor Diamond Donator

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    Sorry about the delay, I think this is fine, approved. Awaiting seconding.
     
  5. Khaos

    Khaos Purple Man Impervium Donator

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    Hi @"Ninin"
    I'll be seconding your application.

    Now, could you tell me what would happen if a pregnant woman were to use this? It is stated that pregnant women should not take it, and I would like to know why that is.
    Pending.​
     
  6. Ninin

    Ninin New Arrival

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    It's mostly just a precaution due to the high contents of pheremones, as it could cause tempermental disorders in the child if they're constantly using it.
     
  7. Khaos

    Khaos Purple Man Impervium Donator

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    Alrighty. In that case, I will be giving this my approval.
    Remember kids, don't be under the influence, inhale vapor instead.
     
  8. AD INFINITUM

    AD INFINITUM Watcher from The Void Ex-Staff Gold Donator

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    deferred: redundant technology.
     
  9. Pinkbat5

    Pinkbat5 pocl v3.6.3 Staff Member Moderator Diamond Donator

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    Moved to deferred because we have a deferred section now
    note to other staff: what was this redundant with?? Maybe we should move it back to approved
     
  10. Pinkbat5

    Pinkbat5 pocl v3.6.3 Staff Member Moderator Diamond Donator

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    Gave it some thought, i can't think of a single piece of lore that this technology is redundant with. Moved back to approved