Pending - discussed in dms, awaiting feedback regarding significant changes
Pass.
First pass after some edits and discussion of use-case in DMs
Name: Advanced Chemical Cuilometer AKA: Noskov Detector 2.0 Description: An integrated-circuit component, often as a stand-alone device of...
Deferred after further discussion.
Name: Wasp Armament System and Pheromones AKA: Wasp Gun, Nightmare Swarmer, Oh God The Bees!, Littlest Warcrimes Description: Two variants of...
Vague but meaningful guidelines are for wiki pages. A tech app should answer specific questions and serve as a reference tool for roleplay where...
First pass.
First Pass.
Pending a follow-up edit clarifying the power cost is high and a large, visible battery is need.
Pending. Only thing I need is for you to explicitly note that 'targeting' is one action, and then a subsequent power move is another, and this...
Second Pass.
Slap that in limitations and this will get a second pass!
Pending. Stylish way to establish a barricade. Just needs a few pieces of clarification: is the shield projected the same length as the projector...
Pending. This rocks and I love it. Minor questions only. When it forms the 'new speech organ', does the voice of the user sound different? Does...
Pending. If this is a sturdy box, it raises questions about what weapons can be used from within it. Kit-agnostic says it doesn't prevent firing...
Pending. Just a minor question. The app says it allows users to 'stick' to the wall - does it REQUIRE you to stay moving, or can you stand still?...
Pending. I'll be your first-pass grader today. Long Fall - Clarify with what gravity (Olympus has stronger gravity than Haven - presumably they...
